The Definitive Online Sports Stylebook

The Ben Watanabe Sports Stylebook

parentheses, brackets, long dashes

Parentheses and long dashes may be used, but should be deployed sparingly to preserve their impact on the audience.

Parentheses should be used to add a comment relating to the preceding clause as an aside. Imagine you are telling this story to your friends; would you mumble this remark under your breath? Then use parentheses.

Long dashes should be used to add a comment relating to the preceding clause that you want to emphasize. If you were telling this story to your friends, would you stop mid-sentence and maybe raise your voice to underline your point? Then use a long dash.

In quotes, use parentheses to replace unclear or misstated words, or to add missing information: “Barry (Sanders) will practice (Thursday) and should be ready to go for Sunday’s game ,” Lions coach Wayne Fontes said.

Brackets have no application.